The Colours In My Eyes.
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May is a 16-year-old girl, she is the lead singer in a band, with great grades and a few good friends, however, she has a dark past present and future.
She is in a deadly street gang in the midst of war, on top of that is colourblind, all she can see is black and white.
until the day she dies.
on the 14th December 2018 the day before she turns 17, she stops her friend from walking into a car, getting run over herself and being killed instantly.
After watching her own funeral, she makes a deal with an unknown presence, She will come back on her 14th birthday in 2015 and be able to see in full colour, everything will be normal, however, she will be prone to accidents, and each time she dies, she will come back, with less colour, and one friend dead in her place.
And now her story takes place, from the view of the unknown.
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