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*Rubs hands together and chuckles with glee*

Hoho! So you want a book review, eh? Let me warn you, I can be BRUTALLY HONEST sometimes. But I promise, I don't bite. So if you want me to write a review on your book, heed the instructions inside and send me your story details. And this is the most important part:

Take everything with a smile.

There! Now you're all set. Let's head forward to a new realm! All the best :)All Rights Reserved

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"Was it worth the cost?" by Ava0anonymous

"We are all meant to die just once, but apparently, that is nothing short of a lie. A fake reality that we are taught in adolescence. When I learned that truth, I lost everything. ፈᏗᏁᏗᏒᎩ When you calmed my mind, you changed me and took the last thing from me that I had. Now I am alone in this world a victim of its unending cruelty. All of you will learn that. When you do you will wish that you treated me better while you had the chance, " This is not a romance novel. Do not think this is a romance novel. The sequel is thought. Not all mobile devices will be able to show all the text accurately as I use fonts as a conveyer of mental health. Warning Every warning you can think of. There will be gore rape torture and what is worse. Also, I make stories by writing the story plot and everything, and rewriting it to fit in the small details. The chapters all the final ones but the story itself has been finished.

Saving All My Love (Mj And Wh Story) (DONE) by nippyXOmike4e

This book is being continued from my other account which is whatupkaykay13...enjoy {update} I deleted the first book cause it was horrible 😭 SN FROM 2021🤣 : YALLL MY WRITING SUCKED BACK THEN!! CRINGYYY ASF AT THE BEGINNING!!😬

CHIVALRY🥀 by Jaynhi

These words, "I'll kill any guy who comes close to you," and "If I don't have you, nobody else will." We took them too lightly. We all had things that happened to us which we vowed never to talk about. Secrets we kept. The lies we said. The heartaches that still hurts at night and the forbidden sex we had with other people. Above all, that one person who didn't fit in the fabulous life we lived. High school was trash. All the threats and fights which occurred made us hate the word 'School' Hoping college would be a good start for us, we held our heads up high like saints. If I'm to really confess what happened, I would say WE all KILLED him. Contains A Little Bit Of Mature Themes and Strong Language. Get Your Tissues Ready❤️

story review shop [[ discontinued ]] by merrrrrrcy

Have you been searching for someone to give their honest opinion on your work? Are you browsing review books to find the next story you'll fall in love with? Me too, bro. The reviews are 100% free for those willing to have their stories criticized, and my reviews are 100% honest with a hint of sweetness to soften things up. Please, come on in and request. Give me something new to read. Give me something /good/ to read.

The Destined Rivalry by -snowfuck-

• "𝒅𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌 𝒊 𝒂𝒎 𝒔𝒄𝒂𝒓𝒆𝒅 𝒐𝒇 𝒚𝒐𝒖?" i spoke to him casually, while twisting the knife in his palms. "𝒅𝒐 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒘𝒂𝒏𝒕 𝒎𝒆 𝒕𝒐 𝒔𝒄𝒂𝒓𝒆 𝒚𝒐𝒖?" he leaned towards my earlobe and whispered "𝒕𝒉𝒊𝒏𝒌 𝒕𝒘𝒊𝒄𝒆 𝒂𝒏𝒅 𝒕𝒉𝒆𝒏 𝒂𝒏𝒔𝒘𝒆𝒓 𝒃𝒆𝒄𝒂𝒖𝒔𝒆 𝒂𝒇𝒕𝒆𝒓 𝒕𝒉𝒂𝒕-" he grabbed my throat with his other hand "𝒊 𝒘𝒊𝒍𝒍 𝒉𝒂𝒖𝒏𝒕 𝒚𝒐𝒖 𝒆𝒗𝒆𝒏 𝒊𝒏 𝒚𝒐𝒖𝒓 𝒅𝒓𝒆𝒂𝒎𝒔" this is not any ordinary rom-com book, this includes immense revulsion character and before reading kindly go through the trigger warnings mentioned! (don't blame me lovies once you dive in, i guarantee every wait will be worth it with me in this journey) as it's my official "first time" writing a book, i would like to appreciate each any every reader who thought of giving my book a chance. -love xoxo-

Right here (Reddie one shots) by books_are_kinda_cool

I do not take requests anymore because this book is finished. :) (I wrote most of these when I was like 12 so don't mind the absolute cringe) Disclaimer: if the chapter says it's been edited that means I recently re-wrote it. Which just means the writing will be better than the un-edited chapters. Bye!

Book 1✔️ Sugar Baby by LoveLiveLust

Highest Ranking #1 adultthemes (01/05/19) #1 eroticromance (24/10/2019) #1 adultromance (26/06/2019) #1 sugardaddy (05/08/2019) #1 couple (16/08/2019) #1 mature (16/10/2019) #2 romance (2/11/2019) #2 ceo (23/03/2020) "You need to shut up baby. Let me take care of your needs. Can you do that for me?" He unzipped my dress, as it falls freely down to the floor. ***** Lori was a socialite, she lived a life of luxury until her parents got a divorce and she was forced to live on her own. She struggled with financing her education and trying hard to maintain her high standard of living. She finally gave up when her best friends treated her like she has the plague and cut her off, then her boyfriend was forced to end things with her when his parents didn't want him to be associated with Lori because of her family's scandal. And that's when she decided to take the offer to be a sugar baby, thinking she'll treat it as a summer job and end it as soon as she's back on her feet again. ********** James never needed a girlfriend. He's a workaholic. He likes the arrangement of a sugar baby where he can pay a sum of money for a companion of a young attractive woman. His friend suggested the idea. With the last sugar baby being too attached to him. It's time for him to find another one. A less demanding one. His eyes locked into the beautiful fragile young woman with an attitude to match. Her fiery yet nervous attitude was refreshing for him, and he wanted her for himself. Will he get what he paid for? Will she get back on her feet? ********** Completed: May 2019 *Warning! R-Rated for 18+ due to strong, explicit language and sexual content*.

Falling for my Asshole Boss by JeniRaeD

Needs editing and will be editing soon Alexis Miller is a 23 year old who is freshly out of college. She was hired right on the spot, when the owner 30 year old Levi Matthews was away on business. When he returns he is shocked to see that he has a different personal assistant. He's very arrogant, intimidating and demanding. Alexis thinks he is one of the biggest assholes she's ever met, but once she gets to know him she see's a side of him that she never thought was possible. Does she fall in love with him? Does he fall in love with her? Who pursues who? PREVIEW: "Tell me this doesn't feel right." As he leans in for another kiss, I let out a soft gasp as my heart is pounding. His kiss so warm and gentle, making me feel week at the knees. His tongue slipping inside my mouth so gentle but yet so demanding. I suddenly feel drunk from his kiss, I feel like I'm melting. He lifts me up carrying me to the bed, gently laying me down. My heart feels like it's going to explode. His body laying on top of mine is satisfying I feel all of him pressed against me. His hands all over me his scent is electrifying, sending jolts all through my body. My fingers run through his hair as they entwine in his hair pressing him harder against mine. He softly grabs my hair pulling my head back for access to my neck. Placing soft kisses along my neck and softly sucking the soft spot behind my ear, as my breathing becomes so erratic.

Jazmine: CEO's Temptation by crazy_writer_97

*Book 1 of CEO series* "Am I a villain?" Mr. Martinez probed, pinning me with his intense gaze. "Yes!" He chuckled and instantly he took two large steps and stood in front of me, "If I am a villain," trapping me, Adrian placed his hands on the table on either side of me, "I wouldn't have stopped that night with just a kiss even when I wanted to do more with you. Even when you were in a completely vulnerable stage to let me have you the way I want, Miss Jazmine Garcia." ** Adrian Martinez, a CEO of the multi-billionaire company, Martinez Constructions. Holds the top rank in the business world. He was known for being a workaholic, cold-hearted, well-respected, and the most eligible bachelor in New York. Women flatter him but since he saw Jazmine he was head over heels for her. Jazmine Garcia is a 23-year-old girl with many responsibilities on her head. A very kind-hearted but reckless. No matter what, she doesn't let people disesteem her. But no one had a glimpse of her crush on her bestfriend's brother, Adrian Martinez. But things will get wild when Jazmine steps into his life as an intern at his company. Little did she know that Adrian's intention was not just to make her work or pay her salary but something else. The thing she never imagined in her rarest dreams gave her pleasure and Adrian soon turned out to be her only craving. ** "And it would be better if we keep a professional relationship. Just like a boss and employee. And never try to manhandle me the way you are doing now." And I turned around. I approached the door, but Adrian whirled me and pinned me against the door by my shoulders. "Your big mouth needs to be punished for spitting in front of your Boss," before I could apprehend his words, I found his lips on mine. ** "I had a dream this afternoon. You spanked me." Adrian laughed, "You dreamed of me spanking you." I nodded my head. "And you thought my punishment would be that simple." And his words made my breath stuck in my throat.

First Love, The Sinner & The Saint by LouLeigh481

Have you ever felt like life wasn't enough, like you were going through the motions day in, day out, all you wanted was a change. Well one day I woke up and made that change, I was no longer the well behaved boy that did as he was told, I was a new person and I wanted to do things my way. I wanted to do what made me feel alive, even if that was murder of innocent people, I wanted to grab someone and watch the life drain out of their faces, it pleased me.. it made me feel alive. This is my story of heartbreak and turmoil, friends lost and friends gained, families torn apart by my needs. This is my life, and I'm proud to be the man I am. Dated created 9th August 2020 Date completed 15th August 2020 Word count 50,000-60,000

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"Was it worth the cost?"

"We are all meant to die just once, but apparently, that is nothing short of a lie. A fake reality that we are taught in adolescence. When I learned that truth, I lost everything. ፈᏗᏁᏗᏒᎩ When you calmed my mind, you changed me and took the last thing from me that I had. Now I am alone in this world a victim of its unending cruelty. All of you will learn that. When you do you will wish that you treated me better while you had the chance, " This is not a romance novel. Do not think this is a romance novel. The sequel is thought. Not all mobile devices will be able to show all the text accurately as I use fonts as a conveyer of mental health. Warning Every warning you can think of. There will be gore rape torture and what is worse. Also, I make stories by writing the story plot and everything, and rewriting it to fit in the small details. The chapters all the final ones but the story itself has been finished.