Take That Mr. Player(rewriting)
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Ongoing, First published Apr 23, 2012
"Woah! Calm down tigress. I was just going to ask if you wanted a tour," He says, his smirk growing, if that was even possible. 

"A tour of what? Your bedroom?" I ask, my arms crossing my chest defensively. Beside me, Rachel starts giggling. She trys to hide it but fails. Miserably.

A look of surprise crosses Jake's face but it is quickly replaced with his signature smirk. "I was going to say school, but if you want to get down and dirty right away then I'm in."

I glare. Stupid player and his cockiness. "Sorry, but I only get with hot guys." I say, smirking at him.
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New house, new school, new friends. Not exactly what Courtney was planning to go through in the middle of the year. It's hard enough being the new girl at the beginning of the year but in the middle of the year? That's just awful. Lucky enough for Courtney, she meets a girl, Rachel. The two hit it off instantly. 

Before the first day, Courtney is warned about a specific boy, Jake Richards, also known as Mr. Player. He treats girls like trash, making them believe he likes them, then leaving them hurt and with no reason. This infuriates Courtney. She can't stand players, especially ones with a world sized ego.

The thing that pushes Courtney over the edge is the history between Jake and Rachel. How he treated her like dirt and the hell he put her through. Courtney's brain instantly starts filling with ideas on how to get back at Mr. Player. For it's never too late for revenge.
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