O' My Daughter, For You Have Sinned
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This is an incredibly shitty poem that I wrote when I was 12 and in 7th grade. It was a class assignment and it was supposed to be about God talking to Zion as if it was a person, and His daughter after the Jewish revolt against Rome. I thought I would share it just for lols. Please don't hate me...
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