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Last published Wed, Dec 7, 2016
Things don't always go the way you expect.
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This is only the first chapter. Apart from a pretty lame short story, this is my first story on Wattpad, and I'm honestly pretty anxious. Writing is a huge passion of mine, yet it's something I struggle with, and it's been years since I've written a complete story. Therefore I want to publish only the first chapter and see what sort of response it gets before continuing. Please leave your opinion in the comments. If I find the motivation, I will definitely continue writing.
Disclaimer: I'm only fifteen years old and English is my second language. Although it's not badly written, you will find errors. Please feel free to correct or offer other advice in the comments; I accept all criticism as long as it isn't straight out mean.
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