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Última publicación mié, ene 11, 2017
Todo comenzó el viernes 13 de noviembre del 2012 a las 23:00 p.m. Los policías aseguraban que el crimen fue cometido por un asesino profesional, nunca se había visto algo semejante.
Mientras que los policías realizaban el informe, Lorenzo miraba por la ventana. Estaba aterrado, nunca pensó que la molesta vecina terminaría asfixiada en medio de la calle.
Nunca podría olvidar ese suceso... ya que treinta minutos antes, él había recibido una nota que tenía una dirección que casualmente era frente a su casa.
Nunca se perdonó el asesinato de la chica, siempre se culparía por no haberla salvado... o por lo menos haberlo intentado.
El asesinato quedó impune, igual que los siguientes tres.
Cada viernes... moría una chica... y cada viernes, Lorenzo recibía una nota...
"Usted tiene 30 minutos... a partir de ahora" junto con una dirección, que habitualmente era el lugar donde ocurrían las trágicas muertes.
¿Querrá Lorenzo salvar a las víctimas? ¿Pondrá en riesgo su vida y la de su familia? Ya van tres muertes... y las decisiones se toman en minutos.
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