Hau X Reader

This is not your typical lovey dovey reader that their life only consists on pleasing Hau. Character development and thought process exist in this story. Ah well if you like this, let me know. My writing isn't too complex, it's easy and it doesn't need a search on your oxford dictionary.
Constructive criticism is always welcome. So feel free to say anything, positive or negative. I'll try my best to improve!