The Elements: The Fire Within (New Version)
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So I know many of you have actually read this story the truth about this is that I started writing this when i was in middle school to high school So I am going to do a major editing over hall and republish my results this may result in a completely different story than you remember but it will be a story that I can back way more that what was previously published I hope you still like my work even when it is completely redone. I took down all my chapters that I had already published. What I am going to do is leave this here and let you who have read this story find out what happened to it. I am going to publish this story anew once I have redone my editing. I will keep the same title but I will call it The Elements: The Fire Within Version 2. Thank you for reading the first version if you did I hope you will read my revised version.
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