Once Gone

Once Gone

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WpMetadataReadMatureComplete Mon, Dec 12, 2016<5 mins
This is a short dialogue based story. The conflict in this is not directly said, though simple to gather. It's for the reader to discover themselves. Both characters are left without gender. This is so the reader can directly connect with the characters better. They are also, of course, left nameless for this purpose. Please, I would really love any and all criticism for this. I would like to hear real critique on what is well done and poorly done on this. I've never quite done a story like this before, but it was really interesting to write. I keep all of my other works unpublished, but this one will remain published. Thank you. COVER PHOTO CREDIT: Massive thanks Goes to Shiro, who receives full credit for the beautiful piece they have given me permission to use!
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He leans in, his breath ghosting over my skin, every inch of space between us collapsing. "Still pretending you have a choice?" His voice is soft, almost amused. My throat tightens, but I force the words out anyway. "I don't belong to you." A low, knowing chuckle rumbles through him. Fingers tighten around my chin, tilting my face up until I'm caught in his unyielding gaze. Cold. Calculating. "Belong?" he echoes, as if the word itself is laughable. "You exist because I allow it. You breathe because I haven't taken that from you, yet." Tears burn at the edges of my vision, but I don't dare look away. "Fight all you want," he murmurs, eyes scanning my face, his grip unshaking. "Scream, beg, break--I don't care. In the end, little one, you'll learn. Because every part of you?" His lips brush against my ear, a cruel whisper of finality. "It's already mine." __________________________________________ A meaningless prank call caused this disaster, a series of deaths and misery. And maybe it was more than a prank call... maybe it was your loved ones, the people you least expect it to be, to stab you in the back. After all, they do say money changes a person. **18+** **DARK ROMANCE**

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