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Bar the Gates

Bar the Gates

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"The inferno of the keep cast a hellish red light upon his weary form, the scar that marred his face more prominent than ever. His uniform was charred and burnt, held together by a few threads. His silver badge, a symbol of his position as commander, was partially melted. 'Sir, the keep is burning. The enemy approaches. What are your orders?' The old general look out upon his people and the keep. In the distance, he could see a sea of darkness and despair - the enemy. The moonlight accented his wrinkles and his graying hair. Although he wasn't in nearly as bad shape as the commander, he had a kind of sadness in his navy eyes, like he was a man that had seen far too much in his lifetime. 'Sir?' The general turned and stared him right in the eyes. 'Bar the gates.'" Cedrica Salvador is just one of the five and a half million people in the great city of New York. Being a 14 year old black girl in the year 1920 certainly doesn't help her situation. But when her adoptive brother is unexpectedly kidnapped, she must go to extraordinary lengths to get him back. Join Cedrica in the new realm of monsters, magic, and mid evil terrors.
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He once told me no one knows the real him.I didn't think he meant it, and not in a good way. He is a straight A student, and everyone knows it, not to mention he is on the swim team. All that though isn't the real him, the real him hides deep within himself. ---------- "Can you please tell me what that was?" I nearly shout at him. All I get is silence. He keeps his back to me. "Please, I need some explanation." I beg. I stay still as he stops dead in his tracks. His body is tense and it's scarring me. He turns around slowly to face me with his hands at his sides. His eyes meet mine, but there is no spark of any emotion in them. They are cold and dark making me look away not being able to hold his deadly stare. I feel uneasy under his gaze, and i feel his eyes burning a hole in the side of my face. "No, I won't explain because it's not important." He says in a low, almost, growl. I flinch and look back into his eyes. I feel hurt by his words and I don't know why, but I know he sees it in my eyes. His faces flashes with regret but it's quickly covered up with his faces going back to it's hard cold look. I feel my heart stop and my face go pale. His look terrified me making me hold my breath. "Breath." He orders. I start to breathe again and just blink at him. "Now go." He orders me again. I flinch involuntarily at his tone and jump back slightly. "Please don't let me walk home alone." I beg in a quiet voice, looking down at my feet. The next thing I see are his black combat boots right in front of my shoes. I look up into his eyes and he looks down into mine confusion written all over his face. "How come you aren't running yet?" He questions searching my eyes. "I just can't walk home alone, please I'm scared." I hear him chuckle. "You aren't afraid of me? What can possibly be scarier than me?" He asks. "Well, I know you will keep me safe." "Why is that?" He questions raising an eyebrow at me. "You haven't hurt me." "Yet." He mutters, but I roll my eyes.

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