Surat buat Abah
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Last published Tue, Sep 18, 2018
Have you ever experienced or realized that you loved someone after they're gone?
Did it ever happen to you that you love that person but don't have the courage to tell them your true feelings until he/she with someone else?
What it's like to be in love with the real person but sometimes you tend to take them for granted because they're still be with you?
Found out everything about love, fear, life, regret and sadness in this book where you might experience a roller coaster feelings after reading this book!
You know people always said, sometimes the words we leave unspoken are the most important ones that should have been said.
So here we go~
My very first english short story is up!
This story is specially dedicated to my late father Mohd Yusof bin Shamsudin whom I never get the chance to tell him how much I love and missed him so badly while he is still alive. "The greatest weakness of most humans is their hesitancy to tell others how they love them while they're alive"
-optimus prime-
If you have the same experienced regardless good or bad, please feel free to drop a comment below and share it with me so that it can inspire and encourage me to write more and finish up this book. Note: if you're a grammar and spelling nazi, it is definitely not a kind of book you're searching for.. It doesn't mean that I am not allowed to any criticism but it is just an alarm for you that my English language and writing are not as good as you are. So please be nice yeah😊
Thank you
Love
Al-fatihah
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