Finding Hope (temporary title)

Rina has been adopted and imprisoned by a organization called "The Enforcers" and has been raised to believe she is only a tool, helping them by using her powers.
then one day, she is rescued by a opposing organization called "the rebels."
Raymond, who helped save her from the enforcers is now the only one Rina trusts.
Can Ray convince her that she is more then a tool and show her what its like to really live and be free?

And What will the Enforcers do about Rina being taken from them?
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Hey guys! yea I know, ANOTHER story?! when I can barely keep up with my updates with my other stories? but I couldn't help it. the idea came and its been going so well.

slow updates because I'm writing three stories (tho this one is favored) and I have no computer now :(

I do hope you guys give this a try and enjoy it!

And please remember to comment! I get discouraged if I dont get any feedback. I like constructive criticism.
So comment please!