Abused Mate

Eveline Quantum is a 16 year old wolf shifter. She was abused since she was 5 years old. She has dull gray eyes, oily red hair, and freckles. Her once bright and happy mood was buried inside her, and her eyes shone with sadness and pain now. She use to be loved and cared until her cousin lied to her pack that she stole her 'boyfriend'. After 11 years of pain, she mustered up the courage to run away. She packed her 'stuff' and sneaked out of her room, and ran....
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Aaron Fade is a 20 year old wolf shifter, the proud alpha of the Night Fade pack. They are the strongest and biggest pack in the America. He has a toned body, green eyes and sleek black hair. He was treated with kindness, and was taught to be fair with women, but he chose his path and became a player. He's slept with all the women in his school, however when he meets Eveline, his wolf, Mac, screams the word he's been waiting for, for the past 4 years.
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Hoi! I suck at writing so.........beware. Anyway hope you give this a chance and tell me how I can improve, oh and don't forget your thoughts!! Anyway, hope you enjoy!