Things I HATE Reading In Other People's Writing
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Ongoing7m
Last published Thu, Oct 24, 2013
So I can't write a "how to write a good story" book because I'm not a very good writer, and my crap isn't really....famous...seriously, I have under 200 reads on all of them. But I am a good reader, and I can tell you what bothers me the most... So this isn't a "how to write a good story" book, its more like a "How to write a story that will make me explode with hatred and boredom and annoyance" book.
--Allyandjackie
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