Ordo Puer

Ordo Puer

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Last published Sun, Nov 10, 2013

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Leea Laeln wasn't sure what had finally driven her insane, but she was sure she was there. Maybe it was the insistent pestering coming from Drew Halend, a.k.a. the boy who hadn't left her alone since they were five. Maybe it was the advances and then indifference coming from Alex Graye, a.k.a. the boy she had had a major crush on for as long as she could remember. Why did she think she was insane? Lately, she had been realizing different things about the people around her. Different, as in, they'd be standing somewhere and when she blinked, they were gone, only to be back the next time she blinked. When Alex asked her to come over, she couldn't be more ecstatic. That is, until ringing the doorbell knocks her out, only to wake in a strange house hours later. The house is full of boys near her age, including none other than Alex and Drew, who seem to be some form of leaders in the house. All of the boys have the same emerald green eyes, just like all of the other men and boys in The Ordo, and just like Leea. There's only one problem. Girls in The Ordo have ice blue eyes. Therefore, by someone's logic, Leea is forced into The Ordo Puer, The Boys' Order. That's when all Hell breaks loose, quite literally actually. An enemy that The Ordo has not seen since Leea's aunt and namesake, Leeala, banished years ago- a she-demon, who has quite the persuasive powers over men- has risen again. And her sons aren't too bad with the girls, either. But that's another part of the story. As Leea struggles to find her place in The Ordo, she also struggles to find a place in her heart for the boy she had tried to push out for years and to erase the place in her heart where a taken boy belongs. Who would've thought the eyes she had always been quite proud of would've caused her so much trouble?

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