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Outside (Demo)

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This is a heavily edited excerpt from on of my very rough drafts of a story I started two years ago. I re-read it and realized how verbose it seems, so I am posting this for the sole purpose of receiving criticism. I would deeply appreciate your feedback and opinions.All Rights Reserved

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