Nella's Broken Box
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Ongoing21m
Last published Wed, Jul 11, 2018
The car hit the guard rail with a loud bang. I was thrown out of the car my body hitting the pavement where I heard a loud crack of my arm. I was there. Peggy was there too. But everything went so horribly wrong.
Chaos is breaking out in these friends lives:
Peggy and Nella get into a car crash
Nella goes missing
And Peggy is in a half death coma!
But there is a bigger mystery than the car crashing itself and some secrets open up between theses friends.
(This is my original story that I created.)
I am no longer writing this story
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You know how many people forget their keys, where they parked their car, or even certain dates? You used to think, how can someone forget something either so simple or so important? Well welcome to my life. What did I forget? Oh you know, my name, my identity and just this small thing called the apocalypse. Mara doesn't remember anything besides waking up in a car that's been flipped over. When she emerges from the crash, she tries to find anyone who can help her get medical attention. Only the first person she sees isn't even an actual person, it's one of the undead. How are you supposed to survive when you don't remember anything? Who are you supposed to trust? Where do you go?
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