The Un-Believers

The Un-Believers

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"Hey Daniel?". I asked. "Yeah?" he replied with a goofy grin on his face "Do you ever feel like your being watched?" ------------------------------------------------------------------- Lilian is a 15 year old young girl that believes that she is being watched everyday from her way home from school. She tells her Mom what is going on, but she doesn't believe her. Lilian then goes to her best friend Daniel, he doesn't believe her either. One day on her way home from school she hears rapid footsteps only a few feet behind her. She stops in her steps, and magically the footsteps stop as well. Lilian turns around to find that nothing is following her. The only thing around was a harmless oak tree. Lilian turns back around and starts walking again. Next thing Lilian knows, she is tied up to a chair. what will happen to Lilian? READ TO FIND OUT
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