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writergirl7652
Ongoing, First published Dec 23, 2016
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This is basically a review book. I'm not the most popular user (not by a long shot) but I'd like to help people make better OCs and stay away from the horror of Mary Sues! This book is not in any way meant to be a hate book, I just want to help you guys make better characters and therefore better stories. I will do the following fandoms. 

- Percy Jackson/Heroes of Olympus
- Harry Potter
- Warriors
- MLP
- The Lunar Chronicles
- The Kane Chronicles 
- Steven Universe 
- Hunger Games
- Divergent 
- Star Wars 
- Original Stories
- Joke Sues
If you have another fandom not listed, please ask me. I may have forgotten to list some. Also, if the character is from an original story, please explain the background/context of that story. 

I will rate your character based on what you've listed and suggest things to add to their profile or take away. I will not cuss at you for a Mary Sue but I will try and help you fix it! Anyways, either comment on one of the chapters or message me if you have a character you'd like me to review.g
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