How to save a lost soul

Me? I'm long gone. Free. But he isn't. I am here to help him. He became lost. Was it my fault? Probably, I wasn't there to guide him. He is empty. Torn apart. Well, I am going to be the light at the end of the tunnel for him.
I will save you, Danny, if it is the least I can do.

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