OK I want to try this so badly and don't comment if you don't like it cause I'm not good writer yet like some people... please I want some positive comments if you could....
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This is definitely NOT fanfiction. This is some original work, and the literal skeleton of a book I'm writing. Constructive and positive criticism only or I will remove your ability to comment. Thanks!