*completed* A Kindergarten Promise (Louis/ One Direction)
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Complete, First published Oct 27, 2013
Becca was 5 and she was his best friend
Louis was 6 and he was her best friend

They made a kindergarten promise which is something you can't break.     

They promise to be bestfriends for as long as they can, but when Louis gets put in a group, One Direction, during his audition for the X-factor, it seems like he'd forgotten their little promise.

Becca has remembered this promise and has been wondering about him for almost 4 years. But has Louis really forgotten?  


Do they end up together or does life make an... unexpected turn?


Afterall.. one musn't break a pinky promise


UPDATE: THIS WAS WRITTEN IN 2013 AND I AM NOT A CARROT ANYMORE so yeah. (6/2015) 

** I am aware that some of the times and flashbacks may not be mathematically correct but just go with it ;) not all of us can be perfect**
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(You got here just in time to let me know I was worth saving) Everything is different, yet so eerily comfortable and the same. There's silence for a moment, and everything is still like the world is holding it's breath and waiting for the right moment to exhale. And then Louis is choking and gasping and his eyes are so wide and innocent and blue like deep pools of azure sea water in the Caribbean and Harry is chanting his name, whispering it softly into the air like a prayer. He rolls Louis on to his side and helps him clear the water from his lungs and he doesn't stop saying his name: Louis, Louis, Louis. He's pulling the older lad's body to his own, sitting him up and wrapping his arms around his shivering frame and rubbing reassuring circles on his back with his thumb and he still doesn't stop because all he can think about is: Louis, Louis, Louis.