A Walk Through Gosmanion: A New Malenion

Gopen, a scientist who lives on earth, stumbled upon a red stone which teleports him to a different planet. After finding the mountain town Gosmanion, he is swept into an adventure which some people are telling him he is chosen for. Joining the Gosmanion Guard, he gets a team to assist him on his perilous task, to stop the one leading the massacres. He has to help, both in the open, and undercover. But can he save the town from all the problems in time?

Please do not hate me if you don't like the Christian parts. Current cover is temporary. I wrote the beginning when I was eleven. Feel free to comment on anything, even mistakes.