Her birthday (Not Finished . Ready For Feedback )

Hi reader ,
Greetings to you ! This story is about my 18th birthday party and basicly about my life as being a tottal tomboy called a very girly name , Layla . I hope you enjoy my gruesome story about what happened during my ashtonishing day and when it failed mysrebly . I sincearly hope that you will have a laugh while reading this story .