Prototype....?

Prototype....?

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Hey, hi, hello. This is going to be one of my first English works, so cut me some slack. I'd love for you to read the prologue and give me feedback? I might continue and might toss this idea away. I'm not sure about the ship either yet, so maybe drop your suggestions in the comments?
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Hi there! I'm new to writing and this is the first ever story I've written. I know there are going to be a lot of mistakes since English is neither my mother tongue nor my first language. So I would appreciate it if readers give me constructive criticism rather than hating me for a few mistakes. I thank you in advance for reading my story. Now let's dive into the story. Shall we?

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