Don't look back

As soon as I get on the bus, I think to myself: "Don't look back Eliott. Don't look back."
This book is actually my first one on Wattpad so please don't judge me if it isn't amazing. But please tell me if you have any suggestions.
Back to the book, Eliott's a half-Indian half-American college girl, who's fed up with her family. So, she does what every mature girl does and leaves her house in warm Arizona and decides to go up north to Minnesota. And....... I guess you're going to have to read to find out what happens in Minnesota.