The Elites
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Last published Sun, Oct 8, 2017
"We will be together till the end."
"You mean, forever?" Evangeline looked up at him, her eyes twinkling under the moonlight.
He smiled, "forever."
How often do we make promises with no intentions of keeping them? That's just what he did. He walked away after promising her a forever. How easy was it for him to just act like she never existed after promising to be with her till the end? But again, they were young and stupid back then with no idea about how cruel this world is.
When you're pretty, popular and an heiress to your family's million dollars worthy business, who wouldn't want to be friends with you? That's Evangeline Rose Lorenzo for you. She's what you would call beauty with an appreciable amount of brains and part of the trio that runs the school.
"You don't drown by falling in water. You drown by staying there."
It's true, though. To truly move on from something, you need to let go and forget everything related to it and everything that reminds you of it. That's just what Evangeline did. After facing humiliation, her first ever heartbreak and after the unraveling of many secrets, she left. She left the place where her pain originated from in hopes of moving on and starting anew. Not a soul except for her family knew where she had disappeared to. After four years, she's finally coming home. And coming home means, she will be seeing him again.
Embark on a journey full of emotions and sentiments, lies and deceitfulness, unfaithfulness and disloyalty, pain and agony, love and affection.
It's a game of hearts and feelings and is definitely not for the weak and fragile. So, are you ready to play?
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