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I am now doing reviews for anybody who request one. I will look at your story before I accept or deny your request. (Please do not be offended if I deny your request, it's not personal) To request for a review you may ask on my conversation board, or in a private message. This being said if you ask for a review, I will ask that you look at my stories first and give some feedback (if you have not already. I will check), which I think is fair. (Please, vote and comment. Give me REAL feedback) Once your stories have been reviewed and published in this book, I will dedicate your review to you and your story will go into my "Reviewed" reading list. If you wish to give me a review on my stories you may follow my format below and post them on my Conversation Board or Private message me. Reviews are formatted like so: 1.) Your Cover 2.) Your Summary 3.) What I liked about your story personally. 4.) Weaknesses I identified. (This is your critique and advice given) 5.) What I thought overall Please, note: I will be polite and I will not tell you your story is trash if I just don't care for the plot. I will be realistic though, so if I come off blunt, I apologize. Also note: I will read as much of your story as I can. It maybe just the first few chapters or the whole book if I enjoy it. I hope that this is helpful and I hope you enjoy these reviews :) If you do not agree with what I have to say about your story you may tell me but I ask that you are polite because I will give you my honest feedback. If you wish for your review to be taken down or ask for another review on your story again (after you have written more) , please just ask. :)
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Esme Things can become clear in a second. When I found Tanner in his office with that woman, so many things became obvious. Tanner's always held himself back from me, but now, secrets and lies come tumbling out into the light. He's never loved me and he never will. I'm no longer willing to be a placeholder in his life, and I have to end our marriage. Tanner I'd been married for four years to someone I didn't believe I loved because I thought I still loved another woman. A woman I had to give up when I chose to marry my wife after I got her pregnant. Now, the other woman's back, she's divorced and is telling me it's our time to be together. Just as soon as I divorce my wife, who's pregnant with our second child. The allure of the past was impossible to resist, so I gave in, met her at my office and my wife found us just...after. So many things became clear to me even before I looked into my wife's devastated eyes. What had I done? I knew what I'd done, and now I had to prove to my wife that she's the one I want.

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