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I am now doing reviews for anybody who request one. I will look at your story before I accept or deny your request. (Please do not be offended if I deny your request, it's not personal) To request for a review you may ask on my conversation board, or in a private message. This being said if you ask for a review, I will ask that you look at my stories first and give some feedback (if you have not already. I will check), which I think is fair. (Please, vote and comment. Give me REAL feedback) Once your stories have been reviewed and published in this book, I will dedicate your review to you and your story will go into my "Reviewed" reading list. If you wish to give me a review on my stories you may follow my format below and post them on my Conversation Board or Private message me. Reviews are formatted like so: 1.) Your Cover 2.) Your Summary 3.) What I liked about your story personally. 4.) Weaknesses I identified. (This is your critique and advice given) 5.) What I thought overall Please, note: I will be polite and I will not tell you your story is trash if I just don't care for the plot. I will be realistic though, so if I come off blunt, I apologize. Also note: I will read as much of your story as I can. It maybe just the first few chapters or the whole book if I enjoy it. I hope that this is helpful and I hope you enjoy these reviews :) If you do not agree with what I have to say about your story you may tell me but I ask that you are polite because I will give you my honest feedback. If you wish for your review to be taken down or ask for another review on your story again (after you have written more) , please just ask. :)
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I was walking down the street when I hard crying in a near by alleyway. I turn into the alley to see a women and a man dead and a little girl trying to wake them up. "M-mommy....Daddy... please wake up!" She said holding a teddy bear in her hands I walk over to her and put a hand on her shoulder. "Sweetheart I'm sorry I don't think they will wake up...." she looked up to see me. "T-they have to!" She said I pulled her into a hug and let her cry in my chest. Hey-O guys! I really hope you like this new book! This is my first time doing a child reader so if it is crap I am sorry! This is also my first time with The Host sorry if that sucks too....I do not own this art! I hope you enjoy~ 2021 Abi: GODS 2017/18 Abby... anyway. I've been working in a rewrite, so if you please, don't read this bull- *ahem* okay, how about you check out the rewrite. Adopted by him (rewrite) it has the same cover photo like this one. Okay! Have a good day. Bye and stay gold~ The book started: June 18, 2017 The book finished: march 13, 2018 #10-xchildreader

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