Broadrib Cafe

Broadrib Cafe

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A struggling cafe owner tries to deal with the recent loss of his wife, being a single parent and running his business alone. He accidentally hires some unexpected help. I am looking for critiques that will help make the story more appealing. The characters Mike and Scott need new names. Please offer suggestions that would suit their personalities. I have much more written and will post additional chapters as they develop.
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