Allegiant #2

Allegiant #2

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Last published Sun, Nov 30, 2014

divergent fanfic tobias tris

I was upset how Allegiant by Veronica Roth ended. So I'm going to rewrite the ending. I was ok with the choices Roth made but they made me cry. No hate please. Thanks and enjoy!

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