Captured
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  • Parts 19
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  • Reads 3,429
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  • Parts 19
  • Time 1h 20m
Ongoing, First published Nov 02, 2013
***EXCERPT***

“Shhhhh, Princess, please calm down. I’m not gonna hurt you.”
“Oh Really? Just kidnap me and tie me to a bed, but nope you won’t hurt me!?” I sarcastically responded.
“I understand why you’re upset bu-“
“You understand? Oh you understand, tell me what you unders- Hey, I know who you are! How could I forget. You’re that kid Niall from school right?”
“Uhhh… yea…listen I am so sorry that I did this, Princess. I can’t regret it more than I already do an-”
“Wait, who are the other guys with you that talked to me earlier?”
“Hello Darling, I’m glad I don’t have to hide anymore.” Harry? Of course!
“May I say it is so much nicer talking to you face to face, Love.” Louis.
“Hi Angel. Long time no see.” And Liam. The only one missing from their group is-
“Hey kitten.” Zayn. That makes five. The five. They were the most popular guys in school.
“What could you possibly want with me? You can have any girl in the school, but instead you kidnap me!?”
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"Why do you keep pretending you're afraid of me?" He hissed, obvious anger in his eyes. "Because Louis; if I'm not afraid of you I'll end up loving you!" I shouted. "And that means I'll get hurt...because that's just the way you are!" I said, hoping he would correct me. "You're right." He said simply after a long pause. "You're right." She was new; he was jaded. She was oblivious; he knew all too well. She was innocent; he was everything but. And anyone who looked at the two would know just how wrong they were together. Yet there was no denying the obvious fire that seemed to heat every time they were near each other. This isn't the typical "boy loves girl- they fall in love" etc. etc. This is about heart wrenching confessions, breath taking encounters, love shattering secrets,and two people who so desperately want to know just what love is.