Proud And Prejudiced UNDER CONSTRUCTION. DO NOT ENTER
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Last published Mon, Nov 17, 2014
So I'm completely re writing this book, reason being that this is so shitty, and looks like the work so a thirteen year old, which it was initially, but in the last three years, I've grown and changed, both as a person and as a writer, and I want this book to reflect that. I hate how two dimensional, un grown and judge mental these characters are, and find myself unable to write until I edit and rewrite them to be people, not pages, if you can understand that. I appreciate the patience of any and all readers.
This is NOT just a modern version of Jane Austen's book ,there are some changes from the original storyline.
Fate was always a bitch to Elle Bennet. When her family moves to Netherfield to start over she meets the rich, hot, popular and bratty heir to one of the most successful companies of the world, Darcy enterprises, it is hate at first sight between her and Jason Darcy. Ignoring his attempts to be friends, or maybe even more, she chooses to date his worst enemy instead. But when her past shows up to bite her in the ass will she look past her prejudices and see people for who they really are or will she let them stand in the way of achieving the happiness she thought she would never get
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