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Ongoing, First published Jan 06, 2017
This is an extract from a story that I'm currently writing. It's only a small section based on one of the characters, Jag Hillson. The plot of the story is written below. I'm interested in any feedback you could give me as it's only the first time I've posted anything. 
The fate of the four lands rest in the hands of four teenagers. Jag Hillson an arrogant Bounty Hunter haunted by the loss of his girlfriend. Electra Norwood a fierce witch unable to open her heart preventing her powers from being unlocked. Ambrose Titus a troubled human seeking acceptance from his father and himself over the one he loves. And Tikaria Brighthorn an elf princess torn between her heart and her King's wishes. The four must embark on a journey across the four lands to the Hidden Caves of Naru to fulfil the prophecy before the darkness consumes everything. A story of courage, love, heartbreak, acceptance and the lengths we go to, to save the ones we love.
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