Twelve Years Unexpected [unfinished]

{first of my polarshort; ps will be my shorter stories that are only a couple chapters long. Criticism appreciated!}
This short will be about two characters that have been very close since they were eight years old- a shy girl named Lori and a sporty yet caring jock called Kafyn, or Kaf for short. They've never dated and never even thought of liking eachother this way; until Lor found out Kaf had felt quite the ambition for ages. Their relationship will be pushed to the limits when Kaf and Lori wind up a little drunk and soon in a hotel at midnight.