The Twisted Symphony

The Malicious reality depicted between life and death. Darkness represents present life; full of suffering, and yet many trust it because it utters sweet words. Then the light, promising goodness and prosperity, but it is a new experience; no one wanting to take chances and leave the world in which they have grown accustomed to...

I will betray no more... read for yourself and then ask me if you are curious of my reasons for including some factors.

I need opinions. I am debating whether to extend into a novel. Or keeping it a poem/short story.