Surpises
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Last published Mon, Aug 8, 2016
Some of us know how it feels being 17 right??? Well with Kortney it's not so good, in the beginning it may seem like it but its not what is seems. In her life she meets a new boy named, Rayan, also known as Ray. She has three bestfriends, Erinique, Keshawna, and Nalana, they all have boyfriends but when one of Kortney's friends is in danger what will he do? Especially when her boyfriend, Kevin is involved too....with this strange person, it'll cause multiple drama between friendships, relationships, and lies. Throughout everything Kortney has to make life and death decisions and make up lies in the long run. Secrets will be revealed. How will Kortney solve it, what will she do? Who will she lose along the way? Who will she meet that surprises her? Find out in Surpises. ~I'm New At Writing Stories So Don't Be MADD Me~
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