(how he saved) my soul

Rayne Anand feels as though the world has torn apart his soul. Damian Fechner, the new boy who just moved in across the street, will do anything to piece Rayne's soul-and will to live-back together.
This is my first ever story, so please, let me know if there are ways I can improve it and if I should continue this (which I'll probably be doing anyway, but whatever). Thanks!