Loop 12
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  • Time 49m
Ongoing, First published Nov 03, 2013
The sequel to Exit Renner (NaNoWriMo 2008), Loop 12 takes readers to a different kind of journey. Experts currently believe that the brain shuts down within 20-30 seconds of the heart stopping, but scientific cases have long since reported that those who have been "clinically dead" for more than three minutes still had some type of consciousness (Resuscitation journal Sept 7th, 2014). What if you lived in your consciousness after you died? Where would you go?

Enter Mayleen, the Ghost Girl, who died instantly in a car crash while driving on Loop 12, a series of connected roads encircling the DFW metroplex. Mayleen was a young wife and mother starting a new career. All that changed when the fatal accident took place and now, she's searching to find her destination. Where is that tunnel of light? Where is God?

Join Ghost Girl in her search for the One with the All.
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They used my vulnerability against me. They used that weapon, to make me accept their stupid idea. And I of course, accepted it, I didn't even know what they were going to do. They tugged and poked and even shoved their disgusting finger in your wound, just to see you cry. To see you change. No pitty in their eyes. They just continue. They drag you around with metal chains, hit you and turn you into a experiment. But I had enough of the tugging, the clawing, the moaning, the crying and pleading for them to stop, but simply feeding them with our pain. They turned me into something, that neither do they know what I am. Their afraid of me, of my reflexes, my strength. I killed a lot of them. They say I have a cold heart, that I don't feel nothing. That's why they call me: Death -----------------------------------------************************************--------------------------------------------- Death. A teen girl, pitch black hair, black eyes, white skin. Her height is 5'8. People are scared of her, not just because of her strength but because of they way she kills. She lived in this hell hole, where they take her to rooms. Examine. Fight. She knows she won't be able to entertain them for long. She decides to run. Soul. Brown hair as mud, blue eyes as the sky. Hight 6'2. Tanned and toned body. Death's best friend in the hell hole they're in, he's as cold as she is. But shows a bit of sympathy. Well... More than her at least. He's been there for her, ever since she entered this place of crap. They're the two most feared. As some people say, they're a perfect couple. Killing. Fighting. Cold hearted creatures. Also known as D and S. Why? That's what your going to find out, joining this adventure with D and S.
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After Death

10 parts Complete Mature

It was recently found that in the ten minutes after a person is declared clinically dead, brain activity continues. Many agree that the time period is seven minutes. Within these final seven minutes, it is said that you relive your life, seeing everything that you have ever done. Not only your greatest hits, but also your worst. These seven minutes include time right up to your death.... so is it possible you could find a way out? (Prone to possible edits)