Illusory

Illusory

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A short and sensual poem. There are no vulgar words within this literary work, although it is based on mature ideas. This is my first time uploading anything I've written, so any feedback would be very much appreciated :)
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A first, crap, draft of a story I'm rewriting in a universe I made up when I was 18 and still love. I don't really intend to publish this - it's the base for what's probably going to be a film, if I can get the main characters to stop jabbering at each other. I haven't touched this draft for more than two years. You get to look at it and see what shit I don't send to the publishers. :) Featuring: infodumps! Run on sentences! Extended metaphors that don't make sense! Purple prose for the sake of purple prose!

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