Mind Tricks: First One Back To Reality Wins
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Last published Thu, Jan 12, 2017
Arizona "Ari" Parker is a fifteen year old teenager with Synesthesia, they enjoy drawing and coloring and often zone out, just paying attention to the colors they hear.
Ari gets into a coma one day, awakening in a bright new world.
Ari at first enjoys this world, thinking that it's real, but they soon realize the world is just a figment of their imagination.
Ari must now race against time to return to reality, before the doctors pull the plug on them.
But whoever said they were alone?
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The original story belonged to @ll-Nishi-ll, but she gave me the story. I ended up changing the plot.
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