Duality (Rewrite)
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Ongoing19m
Last published Mon, Nov 25, 2013
I took a look at my novel after a bit of a hiatus looking after my baby and working like a trooper. It was awful. Stale, pompous, and confusingly composed. Who am I to act like I know the best at authoring? I've never written anything past poetry, let alone a full novel. So I'm scaling back on my delusions of grandeur and adjusting the layout of how the reader discovers the story. I hope you giys enjoy it anyhoo. Let's face it - a good fantasy kicks serious ass.
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