The purpose of this poem was to convey the hold that technology has on us, especially in our relationships. The story told in the poem is an exaggerated impact of the ending of a relationship from a male speaker who undergoes lots of pain and depression to really show the effect it had on him. The revisions I made were minimal, mainly due to the fact that I made it in two hours.
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emotions: natural instinctive states of mind deriving from one's circumstances, mood, or relationships with others. I express these instinctive states through my strung together words of poetry.