FreedomToTheReaders' Exercises for Cat's Writing Bootcamp

This will be my area for completing and receiving feedback on the exercises Cat sets out for us to complete. I'd like to Catrina Burgess for putting together this boot camp, my goal is to use it to become a better writer overall for my own work and to become better at providing useful constructive critiques to fellow writers. The boot camp began January first and will have a new task each month. Please check out Cat's story for more information.