Less pain, more love.

Hi.. This is my FIRST fan fiction written in public, ever. So, be merciful. Also, my english isn't perfect but that's getting practise too while writing, right? There's always something to learn and you can help me progress my writing, so please feel free to tell me, thanks.
It's about my love, INXS frontman Michael Hutchence, who passed away almost 20 years ago by hanging himself in a hotel room in Sydney. They say a bitter custody fight with his girlfriend's ex was one of the main things pushing him over the edge that night.
But now, when I'm the one telling the story, I have a chance to save him. And I will. With my alter ego, 19 years old horse groom. More you can learn by starting to read..
This is purely fictional, not meaning to hurt anyone's feelings. If it feels bad, don't read it.