First Love (David & Liza)
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Kumpleto Fri, Apr 27, 20188h 39m
Just a cliche high-school love story...
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"What is more romantic than this?" I say, spreading my hands, tilting my head back and closing my eyes.
The cold raindrops hit my skin, creating lazy rivers down my face and neck. I find the sensation strangely purifying, my mind clearing from all the negative thoughts and all that is left is pure happyness. When I finally open my eyes, the first thing I see is the smile on David's face. But it's not from his regular ones - not a mischievous one or a smug one. It's different and I've never seen it before, but it istantly goes to the top of my list of my favourite "David's smiles".
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