The Girl Lost In The Woods

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One day there was this 17 year old girl named Michelle, who was walking home from school. She decided to take a short cut through the woods as her family lived just on the other side. She didn't think she would get lost as all she had to do was go straight. She didn't know she was lost until it started to get Darker and Darker, she started to get more and more scared as time went on. She heard a howl in the distance, now she was really scared. She kept on walking as surely she should be close to home by now. She heard a rustle in the bushes close by, she stopped.......and looked as a huge black paw emerged from the darkness. Whatever was behind that paw would surely eat her for dinner. She kept on looking at the bushes as the big black wolf emerged from hiding. She screamed....and fainted.