Obduro: A World of Despair

Obduro: A World of Despair

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*The novel is completed and is 300 pages long. I'm just going to post two different versions of chapter one. Please tell me which y'all like better and if you'd like me to post more chapters.* The world they live in is broken, and our protagonists venture across the lands to figure out why.
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A gypsy boy trying simply trying to survive in a harsh world. But his mother's unknown sickness grows worse with each day and so he must do what he has to in order to earn enough money to find her help This was my main WIP up until a few months ago. I used to spend a lot of time on it but I eventually just lost faith in its potential and moved onto the WIP I'm working on now, which, in my opinion, is a lot better. I know the title doesn't make any sense but if I had actually bothered to finish the book it would have, sorry if this annoys you. As always, comments, criticisms, advice, it's all welcome. Enjoy.

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