I just wanna let you know that at the start my writing is shit so just get through the first to chapters don't worry I will rewrite them this is my first fan fix so give my a little credit
This is one of the first stories I'm getting serious with. I enjoy getting criticism so rant away at the story so I know what to fix. Also please bear the first couple chapters. They were the first thing I've ever written in the past four to five years. I have to say that chapter three is where the improvement in writing shows a little.