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OC/Fan Character Critique?

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I can rate your characters!~
(Picture is drawn by me of an OC in an RP I have)

I'll tell you a little bit about what I do before we start since this is my first story on Wattpad. I've been working on a world of my own and the characters in it for about 2 years now. I also love having Hetalia RPs and I've RPed so much. So that means I have seen a whole range of OCs and Fan Characters. Even when I first attempted making Sonic Fan Characters, I made them cringey as hell too because I didn't know better. Then I grew up. Now, I want to help you by giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, NOT HATE on what OC/Fan Character you want me to look over.All Rights Reserved

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The Brink of Minds | Tim Bradford by writer_daydreamerr

❝I've been falling every day since I first met you.❞ stolen glances, hushed whispers, teasing breaths, lingering touches. 𝘖𝘳 𝘪𝘯 𝘸𝘩𝘪𝘤𝘩 𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙙𝙘𝙤𝙧𝙚 𝙢𝙚𝙚𝙩𝙨 𝙝𝙖𝙧𝙙𝙘𝙤𝙧𝙚, 𝘢𝘯𝘥 𝘮𝘢𝘨𝘯𝘦𝘵𝘴 𝘢𝘳𝘦 𝘮𝘦𝘢𝘯𝘵 𝘵𝘰 𝘢𝘵𝘵𝘳𝘢𝘤𝘵 𝘦𝘢𝘤𝘩 𝘰𝘵𝘩𝘦𝘳. ─ tim bradford x fem!oc ─ the rookie; s1 ~ s? ─ slow-burn, flirting, some spice ─ updating every other day!! ⊱ ──────── ➤ ──────── ⊰

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The Brink of Minds | Tim Bradford

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