OC/Fan Character Critique?
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Ongoing40m
Last published Wed, Apr 5, 2017
I can rate your characters!~
(Picture is drawn by me of an OC in an RP I have)
I'll tell you a little bit about what I do before we start since this is my first story on Wattpad. I've been working on a world of my own and the characters in it for about 2 years now. I also love having Hetalia RPs and I've RPed so much. So that means I have seen a whole range of OCs and Fan Characters. Even when I first attempted making Sonic Fan Characters, I made them cringey as hell too because I didn't know better. Then I grew up. Now, I want to help you by giving CONSTRUCTIVE CRITICISM, NOT HATE on what OC/Fan Character you want me to look over.
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