Did I fall for my kidnapper girl?
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She slowly advanced near to me, closing the gap between us. She leant her body on me and her face was so close to mine that I could smell peppermint in her breath. Her nose softly brushed mine. I stood there stiff as if I had frozen. Starring deep in to her eyes was all I could do. Her upper face was hidden behind the party mask and so was mine. She came even more closer to me and I felt her soft lips brush over mine. She snaked her left hand around my neck. I was more than surprised seeing a girl do this, cause it was normally the boys who do this. I felt the wall behind me and realised that I was moving backwards. She caged me to the wall with both her hands and I was just staring into her hypnotic eyes. Again she advanced closer. She forcefully brought her lips to crush on mine as I shut my eyes tight waiting for the kiss. But hell, I felt something like handkerchief on my nose and mouth that smelt like some horrible chemical. I opened my eyes only to shut them again as she and everything before me went blur and ultimately dark. I knew this was too good to be true. If only I hadn't believed this girl.
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